Text Editing, Text Proofreading, Text Copywriting: Sample Promotion Email Edited
Sample Promotion Email Edited
You will find below one of several emails we edited for a customer in the UK.The first table shows the text our customer wrote, and the second table shows how we 'fixed' it all up for him.
Email Sent To Us For Editing/ProofreadingImagine a directory that spreads your business far better than any directory you can think of? A directory which sends you all the advice you need to help promote your business offline and online? (Grants, SEO tips, Marketing tips and more…) And best of all a directory that is free to join. Find this imagination at BusinessSpread.com click here to register or visit www…… 4 reasons why we outstand other directories 1)Directory’s get 1000’s of hits to their home page. What use is this to you if you are listed under a category where you probably won’t be seen? We are the only directory that allows you to post messages on our front page, this way all our visitors will not miss you! 2)We don’t charge £100’s for a listing it is totally Free! You’re mad not to register. 3)We help you spread your business. We spend £1000’s on research that we will email you for free. SEO tips, Marketing tips and more. 4)We don’t just give you a small slot for a description like other directories, we give you your own page where you can upload images in your gallery and more. These are some of the many reasons why 1000’s of business have already registered to BusinessSpread.com. We have excellent feedback from businesses that can see the difference in their sales especially in hard times like these. |
Email We Sent Back After Our Editing/ProofreadingSubject A FREE, new and better directory to promote your business online (I). MessageHi or Dear … Imagine... Imagine a directory that will spread your business online far better than any directory you can think of. Imagine a directory that will send you all the advice you need to help promote your business offline and online. Imagine a directory that will accept your business listing even if you don't have a web site. Now, imagine such a directory being free to join. Yes, totally and unconditionally free to join! Imagine no more as such a directory now exists, BusinessSpread.com. Click here to register or visit www.BusinessSpread.co.uk to find out more. Special Features of Our Directory 1)Directories typically get 1000’s of hits to their home page. But, what use is this to you if your business is listed deep in a category where you probably won’t be seen? To help you avoid this problem, we have made it possible for you to post specials messages on the front page of the category under which your business is listed. This way all visitors to your category page will not miss you! 2)We don’t charge £100’s for a listing. It is totally FREE to join (whether you have a web site or not). And if you want a premium listing of your business, then it will only cost a link to our directory on your homepage. You’d be mad to miss out on this unique opportunity for free traffic! 3)We will help you spread your business online. We spend £1000’s on online marketing research and we will email you our results free of charge: SEO tips, marketing tips and lots more ... 4)Unlike other directories, we will give you a limited area (such as a few lines) for you to list your business. Instead, we will give you your very own web page where you will be able to upload images, post specials you are currently running and more ... These are some of the many reasons that makes our directory different to the other directories, and why 1000’s of businesses have already registered with us at BusinessSpread.com Register Today Register your business online with us at BusinessSpread and let us spread your business online for you. Do it now and start enjoying free traffic to your web site, and hence increased sales. Registration is totally free and you don't need a web site! Harry Singh General Manager BusinessSpread.com PS We have had excellent feedback from businesses that have registered with us. They have already seen a difference in their sales which is fantastic when you consider we are facing hard times. Privacy Issues: we take your privacy very seriously and will send you just 3 emails to promote our new and exciting venture. If you do not wish to receive subsequent emails, please click here to be removed from our mailing list. |
We can likewise look at your promotional emails before they are sent out and edit them appropriately.
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